Sora-FINITO

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♥IT'S MY LIFE♥

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That's Sora, Donald and Goofy to you! And don't you forget it!

♥It's Now Or Never♥[/size]

Name: Sora
Age: 14
Which game are you from: KH series
Weapons/Abilities: Key blade
Eidolons/ Summons: N/A

♥I Ain't Gonna Live Forever♥[/size]


History: He woke up He woke up in Twilight town, wondering where he was, and then went to the station and met Hayner, Pence, and Olette. His first visit was yen Sid's Tower, where he met up again with the three fairies, who gave him some new clothes. They rode in a Gummy ship and entered into Hollow Bastion, seeing the Organization Xiii and then fighting some heartless, and caught up with some of his old friends. Then went to the Land of the Dragons, and joined the Imperial Army, and friends with Mushu, Mulan and Shang. Sora helped fight the Huns, and then the Hun's sword opened the door to the next world. Sora, Donald, and Goofy headed towards the Beast's Castle. There they saw everyone locked up in the dungeon and freed them, then they went into the Beast's room and fought heartless, and Beast came in, knocked both Donald, and goofy, and sora down witha flcick of his arm, grabbed his rose, and went off. They helped with Belle too, and then they fought with Beast, figuring that the Orginazation Xiii was behind Beasts' strange actions. They had to leave because they needed to continue on with their adventure, but they decided to stop by here and say hi to some old and new friends.
Likes: Kiari
Dislikes: Heartless, Orginization Xiii
Fears: Losing Kiari

♥This Ain't A Song For The Brokenhearted♥[/size]

RP Sample: Check Roxas
How did you find us: Already have a charry
Custom Title: " Their definently not with us. Donald, Goofy and I can handle them for you. And then we can go see santa!"
Anything else you want to shout out: I am trying to get better on my sentences.
Password: Fly free like the Canary
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oh god, finally done with everything, just need the Ok to go and I'm all set.

[Serah Farron]

hmmm gonna have to say no to this, there is much much more you can add to Sora's history. It doesn't reflect any of his past life, his friends or the present.

Also the likes, you don't list the important ones.

He has alot more fears, and dislikes.

This app is just not up to standard, sorry but this app is.........DENIED

[Kimahri Ronso]

If I may add in a few quick tips. I understand Sora's history is long but you need only to touch the main parts of his story, like ignore most of the worlds and tap on his exploits that really mattered (I.E. stuff relating to Organization XIII, Kairi, Riku, Roxas, Etc.)). This way you can still provide a massive history and tell a good tale of Sora's past endeavors. Try to do this in all three games and you should be good, remember. We don't care about what happens to mulan, Beast, Hercules, we want to know about what happens to Sora and his REALLY REALLY close friends. If you don't mind the Spoilers, check Aqua's profile to get a good idea of what should be a good KH History.

Sorry for the long post and I hope you put my suggestion to good use.

((To Serah: If this is in the way, you may delete it. I just felt I should get out my own personal 2 cents for Ole Sora.))